Tag: Writing

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In Miss Tele’a’s writing group we have been writing imaginative recounts.  We chose a picture and could write any story as long as it fit the TREE structure.  Here is my work :

I heard that there was covid I was crying until night. Then I fell asleep crying. I was upset that I couldn’t see my friends but I said to myself I still have my cat.

So I had a good idea. I will call my friends. I called them and then Brooke said I don’t wanna be friends. I was so upset I wanted to stop being a fake friend but I remembered I was not a fake friend Brooke was a fake friend. Later on I was depressed.  

At least I had Cattaleya and Me. I was getting more and more upset that Brooke left Me. Next I wanted to get ice cream but it was covid so I delivered ice cream to make me feel better.

I felt upset and nervous. And then I wanted to go to the toilet and then Cattaleya messaged me and said don’t be upset I’m here for you I replied back and said Thank you you’re a true friend. After that I was happy with my best friend Cattaleya.

Narrative planner The Three Little Pigs

TOPES stands for Title, Orientation, Problem, Events and Solution.

T stands for Title. The title is to show what people are about to read.

O stands for Orientation. The orientation is used to introduce characters and the world that it is set in.

P stands for Problem. The problem is to reveal the cause for the main character’s need to act.

E stands for Events. The events is to detail the actions by all characters, usually in chronological order.

S stands for Solution. The solution is to end the story by resolving actions taken by characters. Show how the world looks like.

 

Poetry

I learnt how to write a poem.

First I chose a type of poem. I chose Diamante. Diamantes are seven lines long. The lines have to be 1, 4, and 7 have nouns. Lines 2 and 6 have adjectives also 3 and 5 have verbs.

Next I needed to chose a topic for a Diamante poem. I chose Maccas and KFC.

Lastly I wrote my poem. I needed to find words that have 1, 2, 3, 4, 3, 2, 1 words.

 

 

Procedural Text

Procedural text tell people what to do something in steps.

The structure of a procedural text is remembered by using TEMPs.

T stands for title. Title is a book that an owner has written down in some kind of story.

E stands for end result. End result is a reader of telling information with people.

M stands for materials. Materials is a list of things while your doing your job.

P and S stands for picture and steps are list of steps thats in order with any picture.

Complex sentence

We learnt about complex sentence.

First we revised our time tenses, there are three; present, past, and future. We also revised the states which are simple, continuous, and perfect.

Next we learnt what a complex sentences is. A complex sentences has two subjects, two verbs, and a aaawwubbis. A complex sentence has a independent clause and dependent clause. A dependent clause has a conjunction stuck to the front of  it. The aaawwubbis are as, although, after, while, when, unless, because, before, if, and since.

Lastly we had to make a two-cell comic strip with  a photo. We made a complex sentence and took pictures matching the complex sentences.

I enjoyed taking the photos. I did well on writing complex sentences. I need to improve on spelling.

 

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